作文道場 • Japanese Composition & Essay Lab
Write or paste a Japanese paragraph or essay for sentence-by-sentence particle, conjugation, speech-register (丁寧体 vs 常体), and natural phrasing feedback locked strictly to your textbook level.
Wonderful narrative about your trip to Kyoto and your daily study routine! Your sentence structure and time expressions are clear. Focus on distinguishing destination particles (に/へ with 行く) from active-location particles (で with 食べる/勉強する), and using が with 好きです.
Sentence-by-Sentence Breakdown (5)
With directional movement verbs like 行きます (to go), mark your destination (京都) with に or へ instead of で. (で before 行く would mean the mode of transportation.)
Accurate and natural! You used で properly to mark Kyoto as the location of the action 見ました.
Because 食べました (ate) is an active event taking place at the cafe, mark カフェ with で rather than に.
In Japanese, 好き (fond of / pleasing) is a な-adjective rather than a transitive verb, so the thing you like is marked with が instead of を.
Use で after 図書館 to indicate the place where the activity 勉強しています happens.
Ways to Elevate This Essay at Your Selected Level
Combine your last two sentences with から to show that you study Japanese every day because you love Japanese culture.
Use 〜てから to smoothly sequence visiting temples and then eating matcha cake.